We have now completed our assessment of your supernatural novel The Powers of St. Katherine's House. Our editorial team has reviewed your manuscript, discussing its style, structure, and market potential. They found your writing engaging and cohesive, with an immersive narrative that draws the reader in from the outset. Your work stands out, and we believe it has genuine potential to find its place in the commercial market. As you may know, we receive hundreds of submissions each month, and only a small number progress to an offer. After careful consideration, we are pleased to say that we would like to publish your book under the Olympia banner, and we are able to extend a publishing offer for The Powers of St. Katherine's House.
My editorial assistant reviewed your submission. I see potential in your Continuance hook. Tying Eleanor’s Jean Harlow aesthetic to the 1792 pact makes her rebirth feel visceral rather than just decorative. The Hopton rivalry over the stolen pearls and forged will adds grit, landing near Mexican Gothic. You’re tapping into a marketable brand of hereditary dread; keep leaning into that ancestral weight, and I'll be interested to see where the rest of this story goes.